Photo by Tess Kincaid for Magpie TalesListen you battleaxe and listen well
There's not enough mace - this tastes like hell
I wanted a horseman's pick not this pike
You're a hellburner- you did this for spite!
A man catcher you're not- nor a mercygiver
I'd rather eat my cuir bouilli than your chopped liver
32 comments:
Powerful but fun words. Enjoyed that.
Chopped liver ~ this isn't!!
great knight work!
Ah, so pithy. A joy.
This is a fun one!
"cuir bouilli" ~ you have cooked up this stew very well and delightful too!! Enjoyed it immensely!!
Fun take on the prompt, enjoyable.
Is this about your mother in law?
fine turn of verse...
rob kistner
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Ouch, stabbing words, indeed. I like it.
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I really enjoyed this.
A powerful fun-punched piece!
Fun take... llove how you stewed on this one.
Awesome!
This is so fun! I love it!
I bet he said those words in a gruff voice!
"Listen you battleaxe and listen well" wow! I may use that in a situation someday! ha! This is a fun one.
Not enough mace, indeed. Love it!
"Listen you battleaxe" caught my attention as well. Fun post.
Smart and funny..love the way your mind works!!
Meaty words, I like this.
haha...how fun...i rather like liver when not cooked to shoe leather...fun word play too...
LOL - Well done!
Oh, joy! I've just bought some lamb's liver today... great with bacom, buttery mashed potatoes and petit pois! Enjoyed your fun telling -off! :)
Love it Kathe.....awesome fun!! :-)
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY GREAT! Very creative. Love the mood.
I like the direction you took with this one - most original!
What a fun twist...you are always so clever...bkm
What a way to speak to a battleaxe!
Dear Snappy: Love how you blending cooking and chopping! Fun take! Never heard of "cuir bouilli" but it does sound dangerously delicious!
Woww!! So powerful in a very anti-battleaxe sorta way!! Superbly written, Kathe!!
Fighting words indeed. Love it!
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